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FACT: 99.99% OF ALL COPY CONTAINS ONE OR MORE OF THESE HIDDEN FLAWS

From the keyboard of Michael “The Copy Polisher” Millman
Perched on a hill in Temecula

Greetings, good friend of Internet Marketing News Watch...

Even though you're probably unaware of it, with each passing moment, your sales copy is constantly hemorrhaging away growth producing profits that are lost FOREVER.

The good news is, you're about to know not only why your copy is bleeding away profits, you'll also discover how you can get those gaping wounds stitched closed right away so they heal not only without leaving a scar, the areas they were in become stronger and healthier than ever before.

This is all about the language patterns of the well intentioned yet unconscious bungler that exist in your copy that are draining away potential conversions and profits from your bottom line.

Would you like to extract the maximum benefit from every bit of hard fought traffic you get?

You’re about to be able to do just that, in spades.

Have you ever wondered what more you might be able to do to increase your conversions and pump up your profits?

Hang in there and pay close attention, because the secrets are about to be revealed.

We both know the formula, Visitors times Conversion Rate times Sales Price = Total Revenue, right?

Increase any one of the elements to the left of the equal sign and your profits obviously go up.

That’s just simple math.

Most people seem to focus exclusively on getting more Visitors, which frequently increases costs (if you’re buying traffic or paying others to create it organically). Sales Price is often initially tested to max out profits, then is arbitrarily left in a static state.

All too often Conversion Rate gets overlooked as something to focus attention and effort on, doesn’t it? Would you agree that’s because it’s the least mechanical and most mysterious part of the equation?

That’s a shame, because that’s the one place you can create the most impact for the least relative cost, because it tends to be a one time expense you reap the rewards from forever.

Would it be safe to assume you’re here right now because you’d like to increase your conversions and pump up your profits based on the special copy makeover offer alluded to in Mike’s email?

Okay, that was a rhetorical question, I know.

Just checking to make sure you’re really here on purpose and not just idly surfing around.

Good...let’s get on with the vitally important business at hand...How to increase your conversions and profits virtually overnight.

That’s undoubtedly what you’re here for and that’s exactly what you’re going to get the opportunity to have done for you.

You might want to choose to print this page out now, to both capture it (because it will likely disappear soon) and to be able to take it someplace where you can relax and intently absorb it all (perhaps with your favorite beverage as if we’re having a great first conversation, which I do look forward to having with you soon).

You’ll find this piece will likely enlighten, educate, entertain and inspire you. At least that’s the intention. If you’re the kind of person I’m passionate about working with, it will also motivate you to take immediate action to capitalize on the rich benefits it promises to bestow upon you and your enterprise.

If you’re really astute, you might even pick up on some of the master class copy techniques that ensure the maximum compliance from your prospects that are woven into this message for you.

Interested in learning something new?

You’re gonna love the outcome. It’s something you can take to the bank.

As we begin, notice that the information on this page is presented simply, with just words...admittedly LOTS of words...no fancy graphics, no dazzling videos, no seductive audios.

One of the reasons why this message is being conveyed with just words is precisely because it’s about words. The words on your pages, the words in your emails, the words that are spoken in your audios, videos and during live presentations.

(The other possibly amusing reason, quite frankly, is because the time window of possibility for presenting this opportunity was so short, all I could do was dash this off and hurriedly throw it up on a page for you to act on before the window closes.)

Oops...I digress (again).

Words ultimately are what make your sales happen (or possibly just as importantly, not happen, as we’ll get to). Words are the most important factor in every selling tool you rely on to create your income.

Every copywriting course, every copywriting teacher and every copywriter you’ve studied (or hired for that matter) has focused on the importance of positively compelling words etched onto pages in a flow often likened to a "greased chute", leading your reader (hopefully smoothly) to your desired action outcome.

That’s nothing you haven't heard before too many times to count, right?

Stick with me here because a revelation is coming, I promise.

The shocking truth is, there’s a somewhat fatal flaw lurking in the simplicity of that time honored methodology that’s costing you conversions, sales and lost profits. This flaw is like a leech constantly sucking away some of the lifeblood of your business.

The “greased chute” everyone works so intently to create has hidden rough spots along the way that slow down, and sometimes throw your reader off, causing them to defer or resist taking the action you want them to take.

Here's the rub...

We’ve become culturally complacent about some language patterns that are pervasive in our communications that have a negative impact on the subconscious mind, creating nagging doubt, distrust or outright rejection.

Shockingly to those few who currently recognize them, these language patterns show up in virtually every advertisement you hear or see, as well as in almost every piece of sales copy written. I shake my head in wonder constantly as I see and hear them used again and again, draining away valuable potential income. As soon as you know what they are, you’ll be noticing them everywhere too.

I’ve labeled these profit killers...

I can virtually guarantee you we’ll find them in your copy too (no matter who wrote it), causing you to leave untold lost profits on the table.

Take heart. It’s really not your fault.

You’ve undoubtedly always diligently done what you’ve been told is the right thing to do in writing your copy. Or, you’ve trusted someone to write your copy who has followed all the old school methods.

Almost all the copywriting courses and so-called copywriting “goo-roos” really do teach valuable information.

That’s not in question.

The problem is that they have just been ignorant of this important information...until now (or at least until you can get the eCourse set for release this fall that reveals exactly how to identify and masterfully fix all seven of these pervasive copy problems).

Every word, every phrase, every sentence of your sales message that your profits live or die by whispers to your prospect either positively or negatively. In the all important realm of persuasion, those whispers are frequently bypassing your prospect’s conscious, logical mind. The whispers are working directly on them through their subconscious mind, where your prospects react and decide yes or no based on how they feel about your presentation.

You’ve probably heard it at least dozens of times before. People buy based on emotion and then justify their decision with logic. Emotions are frequently triggered by the subsconcious mind’s processing of ongoing input.

Imagine it like this...

Picture your prospect having a bright, glowing angel perched on one shoulder, and a dark, dastardly devil squatting on the other.

Listen in as the supportive angel lovingly sings your praises into your prospect’s right ear in reaction to all the positive persuasion elements that have been so carefully and intently crafted into your presentation.

Cringe as you hear that devious little devil trashing your message in your prospect’s left ear based on negative persuasion elements in your copy you didn’t even know were there.

Feel the hesitation and reluctance in your prospect’s gut...the one who is not already a raving fan of yours...the one who is seated astride the fence, not yet sure of which decision to make.

What we’re gonna do is make sure a higher percentage of your prospects decide to come down on your side of that fence, doing whatever it is you want them to do. Sound good?

How are we going to do that, you ask?

We’re about to transport you into a whole new realm of perfected persuasion copywriting that eliminates the negative persuasion elements that are like leaky holes in the bucket you’re using to carry your gold pieces to the bank.

Ready to join me on that profit enhancing journey?

If you find that you’re nodding an enthusiastic yes after that somewhat lengthy preface, here’s the solution you’ve got access to right now, today...

It’s absolutely guaranteed to increase your conversions and your profits...

The forthcoming eCourse is something I’m certain will change the trajectory of how future copy is written, and how existing copy is polished to persuasive perfection. It won’t detour from the time tested classic approaches of all the master teachers. It will supplement them.

I predict it’s going to be referred to as The Missing Chapters of Compelling Copywriting.

As I prepare for the pre-release promotions, I’m offering a one time special price to work with a few motivated, like minded marketers, applying the techniques I’ve been using to write and polish copy over the course of the last twenty five years.

(Yes, I’ve been writing copy "hypnotically" using influence and persuasion information and techniques I learned at the hands of Anthony Robbins, Milton Erickson, Robert Cialdini and Jay Abraham, among others, long before I had the pleasure of learning about Joe Vitale and his amazing gifts he’s been sharing with the world.)

The truth is, I really love doing makeovers. There’s nothing more enjoyable to me than taking an existing piece of work and using my special gifts to make it better. There’s nothing more satisfying than hearing the thanks offered when someone uses my work to impact more people in a positive way, and to make more money in the process.

Do you have anything like that, that you’re really good at and love to do for others more than anything else? Can you relate to the total satisfaction I’m describing? I’d love to hear about it.

When I told Mike at IMNW about my project, my plans for promotion and my intention to do some high profile makeovers to show before and after results, he was very persuasively convincing in calling in a big favor to be able to offer a smokin’ hot special deal for his subscribers.

Honestly, I do owe Mike a great debt of gratitude and was ultimately glad to oblige his arm twisting request (even though it means nearly giving away my time, which was one of the most challenging elements on his request list!)

Because Mike is such a great, kind and generous guy, you have the extremely limited opportunity to have me do what many have affectionately referred to as “working my magic” on your copy for a tiny fraction of my usual fee, and you’re guaranteed to get conversion increasing results.

Not only that, you’re also going to be getting a slew of additional valuable bonus considerations for participating in this product launch as one of a select handful of “guinea pig” proof testimonials once you grab one of the few positions available.

I suspect there are two important questions running through your mind right now...

Was I right?

Since you and your increased conversions and profits are what’s most important, let’s address what’s in it for you first, shall we?

For starters, you get arguably the world’s best copy polish and makeover artist to hone the copy of your choice to persuasion perfection for an entire day with a huge chunk of the usual fee subsidized for you. Not only that, you still get a money back guarantee that the polished product will increase your conversions and make you more money.

(In case you’re wondering, I’ll support that fervently held belief about being the world’s best later in the true stories I’ll share of some of my high profile interactions. I think you’ll be convinced, or at the very least will allow for the possibility that it’s so. Besides, would you really want to trust someone who didn’t genuinely believe they were the best at what they do working on your income producing stuff?)

Next, you get additional free exposure for whatever project we work on for you. Your project will be featured as a Before-and-After Example in the soon-to-be-released eCourse (living on in perpetuity). It will also be frequently mentioned in the pre-release promotions which are intended to include numerous JV teleseminars and other online promos.

Hard to say how much that additional ongoing traffic will be worth to you, isn’t it?

If you’re in a position to promote the eCourse as a JV partner when it’s released, you get a higher commission payout than those who haven’t had me work some of my magic for them.

Stepping up, taking action and being an adventurous pioneer does deserve its rewards, right?

Finally, you get a complimentary copy of the finished product delivered into your hands with my gratitude for stepping up and participating. Price hasn’t been determined yet, so I can't say what the value of this extra goodie will be, other than you’ll find it priceless for the future impact its content will have on your ongoing income stream.

Does all that sound like a darned good pile of benefits for you?

I’m certain it should, especially considering how little you’ll be investing to take advantage of this offer.

Okay, let’s go over all the reasons why I’m willing to do all this for you for such a small investment from you.

Beyond the fact that I agreed to this exclusive special deal as a personal favor to the first twelve the next seven (sorry, now SOLD OUT) of Mike's subscribers who quickly grab their spots, here are the substantive reasons why I'm doing this that give me significant enough value in this case to offset the insanely low price.

First, it will obviously be in my interest to have a number of fresh and preferably high profile
Before-and-After examples with results to refer to and show off in the eCourse and the pre-launch marketing.

Second, I believe there will be some amazing connections made with those who capitalize on this offer. These connections will lead to ongoing creative interactions that will be extremely profitable for everyone involved.

Third, this offer will likely drum up more interest from potential JV partners to promote the finished product once it’s ready to be released.

Fourth, as in times past when I’ve put a compelling offer “out there”, I’m certain there will be others who step up who want what I can deliver beyond the basic offer and benefits presented here, and I’m certainly always willing to entertain other possibilities.

Finally, doing what I love to do for others completely fulfills all of the Six Human Needs for me.

Doing this gives me:

1. Certainty - I’m absolutely certain I’m the best at what I do and I always succeed
   
   
2. Uncertainty - There’s variety in the constant new challenges of each unique project
   
   
3. Significance - Delivering unparalleled results makes me significant in my clients’ eyes
   
   
4. Love & Connection - I always form strong, genuine bonds with those I like to work with
   
   
5. Growth - I tend to learn something new and valuable from everyone I collaborate with
   
   
6. Contribution - Making magic and money happen is one of the best gifts I can give

Ergo, in the end, it’s all good for both you and I. Proverbial Win-Win wins again.

Okee dokee, your next big question I can hear screaming for attention is...

If you’d be willing to indulge me, I’d be willing to share some of my history in the form of concise, true stories of professional interactions I’ve had with some people you may have heard of.

You might want to know this stuff and may find it interesting, so I’ll share these stories because we haven’t had a chance to get to know one another yet under more personal circumstances...

Or, you might want to skip this section entirely as superfluous, boring drivel. No offense taken if you do.

You’re welcome to jump right to the next section by clicking here if you wish.

The point of sharing all these stories is to reveal some of my real, human interactions with a few people many would consider to be out of reach on a personal level, and the impact I’ve been blessed to be able to have on their lives and to receive from them.

It will be an honor to be able to connect in a similar way with you, and to produce similar positive memories of the two of us generating profits creatively together. I’m truly looking forward to it.

Here it is, plain and simple...

Hand over ANY piece of copy, regardless of who wrote it, and by “working my magic” and applying the techniques that will soon be revealed, you’ll get back a revision that will definitely beat the conversion rate of the original, guaranteed.

Yes, that even applies to already great copy written by legendary names like Carlton, Kilstein, Edwards, Fortin, Morgan-Ferrero, Vitale, Galletti, that evil genius Mass Controller Kern and a whole host of others too numerous to name.

I know there are some who will howl at this claim, and to them I say I am always willing to take on the challenge to prove it.

Just to be sure we’re clear, I’m NOT dissing ANY one of those highly regarded copywriters or their work. They are all great writers deserving of professional respect and the successes they’ve achieved.

That being said, I’ll wager that like me, every one of them is always eager to learn anything they can that will give them an edge, and would willingly admit that there’s always room for improvement, including in their own work.

So why would a virtual unknown in the land of so many who are well known take such a risk and make such an audacious claim?

I’m glad you asked. It’s really very simple.

It’s because that’s who I am.

The truth is, I am genuinely certain I’m the very best there is at what I love to do most. Part of the reason I am so certain is because I have numerous ongoing internal and external references that validate that belief for me, including a long history of results.

It’s now hard wired into me as my identity so that belief acts as both a compass and a driving force in everything I do.

How is that of any consequence or advantage to you?

The esoteric reason is because the strongest force in the human personality is the need to remain consistent with how we define ourselves. That means I will always do everything I can to demonstrate through my performance that I am who I see myself as.

What that really means is that my internal coding has a prime directive that says, Failure Is Not An Option.

The practical reason is that by putting myself on the line and making such a big, bold, outrageous claim, you can count on the fact that I’m going to do everything I possibly can to fulfill on my promise and uphold the identity I’ve claimed.

The bottom line is all human behavior is belief driven.

As far back as I can recall, my primary question has been “How can I make it better?”

Your primary question is the question that drives your life, that determines your actions and outcomes.

As weird as it may sound, in my head I'm constantly editing and polishing all the copy I read, as I'm reading it. It never shuts off. I tend to read it as I see it should have been written to be most effective.

Put that non stop stream of creative consciousness to work on your projects and it will generate you a great return on your investment.

For me, making something better is my gift to someone else. It’s what I was made to do.

Because it fulfills all Six Human Needs for me, it’s the life giving force that propels me constantly higher and higher.

What this really means is that the sooner you put me to work for you, the sooner you’ll reap the rewards and benefits of having done so.

Here's an important question for you to ponder. When is the better, easier and more advantageous time to forge a long term beneficial alliance and build a relationship with a powerhouse resource...when that person is an up and coming relative unknown or after widespread recognition of their expertise and results producing prowess thrusts them into the spotlight as an accepted leader in their field?

Okay, I can clearly hear your next concern...

You may have noticed a while back that Frank Kern gave his buddies at Creative Digital Media a little boost by introducing their landing page graphical makeover service through one of his cool videos.

They offer a design makeover for $5,000 that’s guaranteed to increase your conversions (in some cases drastically), without changing a word of copy on the page. If I recall correctly, most of their examples were squeeze pages, and the increased conversions were realized as increased opt-in rates.

Those guys are really good at what they do and I’m sure their service is well worth every bit of what they charge.

If not touching the words and just changing graphical layout and page elements can make such a difference, imagine how much more of a conversion difference can be made once we make sure the words on your pages are the most persuasive and effective possible.

I brought that up to create a bit of contrast and to position this Full Day Persuasion Copy Makeover offer as the genuine bargain that it is, as well as to underscore why only a few makeovers will be done at the price you’re getting.

Let’s recap everything that’s included for you:

• Arguably The World’s Best Copy Polish & Punch Up Artist Will Give Your Choice Of Copy A Full 8 Hour Persuasion Polish Makeover
  
  
• Your Project Along With The Before-and-After Results Will Be Featured In The Upcoming Breakthrough Persuasion Copy eCourse and The Pre-Launch Promos
  
  
• You Will Receive A Complimentary Copy of The Course When It’s Released
  
  
• You Have The Opportunity To Hold A VIP Spot As A Favored JV Partner For The Product Launch

When I'm willing to take the work, my standard hourly rate for writing copy and doing makeovers is $600 per hour, so my fee for a full day of my time and expertise is typically very close to the $5,000 that the guys at Creative Digital Media are charging for one of their page makeovers. The results I consistently produce easily justify that fee.

You can use this Full Day Persuasion Copy Makeover on any of your sales messages. This offer is not limited to web pages. You also can have it applied to autoresponder sequences, direct mail pieces, platform presentations, scripts for audio or video productions or anything else you can come up with that relies on words to convince, persuade or sell.

Since this is a one time, special project offer, you can take advantage of the opportunity to have me work my magic on the project of your choice for a full day for a tiny fraction of my usual price. You can if you act immediately and beat others to the punch, because...

Napoleon Hill, in his classic work Think and Grow Rich, identified the sixteen traits common to highly successful people. One of the most important traits he found was that the most successful people make decisions quickly, and change their minds slowly.

To be a successful person, you must be decisive. How many times have you postponed a decision only to miss out on a great value or a great opportunity and lived to regret it?

That sucks, doesn’t it?

To quote my friend Anthony Robbins, “It’s in your moments of decision that your destiny is shaped.”

When would right now be a good time to decide to take the action that’s guaranteed to increase your conversions and your profits, while this golden opportunity is right here in front of you?

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To be completely fair, this work will be done on the projects in the order they come in, by the date and time stamp on the payment confirmations. So, it’s clearly in your interest to hustle.

Even if you feel we need to have a conversation before deciding to turn me loose on your copy, I encourage you to reserve your place immediately by locking in your booking right this minute. I'm only planning on doing twelve of these makeovers at this crazy price for reasons that should be obvious by now. If we choose not to move forward with your makeover, I’ll simply refund your payment right away and make your spot available to someone else.

Here's one final question for you...

I’m curious. A couple of months from now, after the twelve Full Day Persuasion Copy Makeovers are completed and producing great results, and the promos for the eCourse covering this breakthrough copywriting methodology are launching, would you prefer to be saying “I’m really glad I took immediate action to be one of the lucky twelve”, or “Man, I blew my chance. I really wish I decided to take action when I had the opportunity”?

Click the Add to Cart button below right now to book your Full Day Persuasion Copy Makeover while your spot is still available to you. You’ll be very glad you did...guaranteed.

I will contact you very shortly after you've placed your booking to arrange a preliminary consultation and to get your copy from you for your makeover. Talk with you soon!